MitthuKittu

Hey<3 If ur looking for ways to promote ur book, check out Nexus, You are invited to Join, join Nexus thro @LoveofTheCursed <3

Hi! Your story was really good, and i just have one suggestion... i feel like it was very short and a longer and fleshed out version of the story would give more perspective to the individual characters and their motives. Like for example showing tanya's pov and why she cheated, aarav's love for tanya and why he did what he did, some secret plot twists (like the psycho turns out to be the boy she cheated with) and more obstacles for aarav and in general making the characters more gray rather than black and white. Otherwise it was a rlly good story!