MikesCrackFics

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I watched FNAF2 yesterday, absolutely cinema. That shit was pure hype and aura moments and I loved it. Don’t think the story’s that bad personally, though the subplots are like severely undercooked and so are a good amount of characters. It was definitely scarier than the first too. Overall I enjoyed it more than the first, peak entertainment. Fuck the critics

NoirsBeever2

@MikesCrackFics Yeah I agree I did enjoy it more than the first but for me I guess its like a one time thing watch, I had a fun time for sure in the theatres but I wouldnt really want to watch it again, the story was a underwhelming for me but still a pretty fun experience. Like I was hyped in the theates but after awhile the hype died in just a few days. Glad you enjoyed it though
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MikesCrackFics

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I watched FNAF2 yesterday, absolutely cinema. That shit was pure hype and aura moments and I loved it. Don’t think the story’s that bad personally, though the subplots are like severely undercooked and so are a good amount of characters. It was definitely scarier than the first too. Overall I enjoyed it more than the first, peak entertainment. Fuck the critics

NoirsBeever2

@MikesCrackFics Yeah I agree I did enjoy it more than the first but for me I guess its like a one time thing watch, I had a fun time for sure in the theatres but I wouldnt really want to watch it again, the story was a underwhelming for me but still a pretty fun experience. Like I was hyped in the theates but after awhile the hype died in just a few days. Glad you enjoyed it though
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MikesCrackFics

Hello guys! So given how much I’ve kind of gone back and forth on this fic, I think I should apologize for the amount of times I’ve posted, then deleted. I’ve been watching videos on writing a story and doing so has helped a lot in identifying what works and what doesn’t work. I have a better idea of how to structure and pace things, and I also have a much better idea on how to incorporate the ideas I want into the story. That said, chapter 1 will be out within a week or two.

NerdGuy00

@MikesCrackFics noice I'll give u a shout out when it does your a great writer
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BOXKNIGHT

Yo everything okay mate? you have not really been active for a month and the fic gone again, something bad happen personally?

MikesCrackFics

Nah it’s good lol, I’ll try to work it out again whenever I can but it’s been busy recently
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BOXKNIGHT

I uh apologize for saying the last part without really caution.
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NerdGuy00

Hey man I was wondering are you okay

NerdGuy00

@MikesCrackFics okay as long as your okay
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MikesCrackFics

Hiii, yeah I’m good lol.
            
            Life’s just been really busy this summer so I’m someday once again just gonna start again from scratch. I had surgery like last month and so I’ve spent most of my summer recovering and haven’t been able to watch MHA, hence my lack of activity here for the story.
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Athrun0505

Hi , I want to recommend 2 short stories invented by MHA fans. One in the form of a comic book (https://mangapark.org/comic/99244/boku-no-hero-academia-true-hero-doujinshi ) 6 chapters each, as well as videos (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85MkVs1zZJc&list=PLLmtAYJYwWSgywVelB7ESM8TMDiNFEzPo ) also 6 chapters each. I thought if you look at them, you'll find something interesting for yourself.

BOXKNIGHT

So the fic rewrite is basically going to make the charecters a lot better written, have better depth with them and moments with him and interactions, and help establish peters charecter better? while also taking time with each of the stories and chapters that happend in the show?

BOXKNIGHT

Like they say slow but not too slow but not too fast pacing makes great stories and chapters ;)
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MikesCrackFics

@BOXKNIGHT yep, pretty much what I plan on doing!
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BOXKNIGHT

I think the best way to do is basically having like a bit more chapters at the start like the last story with the usj event was like im pretty sure 8 but i feel like doing more will help flesh out the charecters more and doing it before the big event will help
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