Since I could not copy-past from Word into the chapter of your cool Deadpool/MHA tale, here's my full review:
Nice use of the 4th wall, so characteristic of Deadpool, and Always fun!
The nonchalant way the character describes being disfigured and dismembered is disturbing... yet entertaining. Just like Happy Tree Friends. The inner dialogue was also powerful, like the classic angel and demon on our shoulders turned up to eleven.
Your bônus mini chapter reminded me of a show I went to: the band played a song and went to the audience: “say, did you guys notice one of the best parts of most shows is the encore? Yep, so we decided to make the whole show the encore.” Played another song, and said the usual “good night, love you all, drive safely home”. And left the stage. The audience, laughing, asked for encore, the band returned to play for another 2 hours.
Anyway, the way Deadpool cntraltdels himself is... something. And him eager to murder people... You have a knack for creating this kind of scenario. I wonder what Nezu wants.
