MegMarilyn

quick poem "Happiness" take a look!!! XOXO

I've updated Holly's Dare

The first chapter of the new story I'm working on is finally up. I thought you might want to check it out. :)
          Let me know what you think!
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/4546046-untitled
          
          

MORE UPDATES! <3 ya guys!

GUYS! I added barley a paragraph. I am trying to get even a small amount in so I can keep you guys updated and, most importantly, interested! Let me know what you think! :D 

Hey Everyone, 
          I added a tiny bit more to Holly's Dare

@Meloyellow95 thank you so much for taking the time to read "Holly's Dare" I will def try to take some of the repetitive naming out. I hope I can continue to keep you reading, and please stop by anytime to read the updates and give me further tips!
          THANKS AGAIN :D
          Meg-

Ok so my opinion. You say everyone's name way too much. Someone did this, then that same someone did that, then agian that same someone said this, ect... mix it up with some he's and she's. Such an easy fix. Your beginning caught my eye and really did make me want to keep reading, but learning about (Holy's?) mom disappearing it seemed way too fast. But your "flow" in the story is wonderful, and your tone seems to be funny with a bit of kick. Something I love, especially with these types of stories. Talking about these types of stories, your idea and so far plot? I think it is different and even though it may have been done before somewhere in the world and some point of time, I don't remember ever reading something like it. And for me, a person who reads about three books a week, that says a bunch. I'm going to love to see where is story goes. 

GUYS! I have updated holly's dare take a look!
          

Gee thanks Meg for adding me! ;) lol