@MarianneDizon
I am not angry, I am happy, very very coz u took the pains to actually read my story
But would pls comment me on the spot where I have an error...that would be easier. And from my side, I will edit it to my best.... Thank u so much :-)
Thanks pls do
Hi there! Could u pls check out my story Cahoots and give me your critiques? Maybe some votes too?? Thank u :-)
@kuttysona2000 hello there..your story is nice..but dont get mad ok?..since you ask for my critics here it is..try to read your drafts first before you post the chapter.some words are wrong.or some sentences are wrong..when it comes to delivering their speech..and can you pls make it more realistic with your choice of words..hope it will help.thanks
Thanks po sa pag-add ng story ko sa RL niyo :)
sana po mabasa niyo.
love 2 read c: