Neoko-A

Hello,thakyou for constantly reading my story,I highly appreciate it

Luckey62

Hey @ Efghel my suggestion you need to make the next chapter longer, don't add too many things for MC like why your MC needs 4 cars just 1 is enough, and please when someone talking give it space like the Kantai collection story in my reading list just that (and sorry if there any wrong word or grammar, my main language is not English I write this with help of Grammarly)
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Neoko-A

@Efghel please leave some suggestions to improve my story
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