corkykong
https://www.wattpad.com/story/276818765?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=corkykong&wp_originator=a8LLyE5gQEoWOW%2Fydm1y1X0VqJn8o%2F99T2wkbeygHhAkq3VK7HOiWHSbVkHcD%2F8i0LNVcaanxqgpoUQIOydFzKbLKn9%2FxZyk8pzcOKd3mfCi5dnS5IFgPYDq8BGDeR7k Pst... Hey! You there... Eh, I don't really care. Though I made a story similar to yours. It's a titan inside of the RWBY fiction, but with a twist... Your guardian (Tank) is taken, and slowly becomes part Grimm as well. I personally think that the story is going well, but I though that I should run the story by another Destiny x RWBY writer... Or Destiny writer in general
corkykong
@corkykong nice! Thanks for the input. Oh, I did forget to mention that Tank (due to his connection to darkness). Instead of taking wills like Oryx; you have the ability to take trauma and pain away. So you end up having a few Grimm buddies that you cleansed.
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KazumiSaki122
@corkykong Overall it's pretty good from what I read, granted I did jump around, and back and forth a few times just to get ideas of it. I can't lie I've personally always loved the Taken Guardian concept so I thought that was pretty cool, overall I enjoyed your story. I'd have to read in depth a little more for more feedback but right now it's only positive. Keep up the good work guardian.
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