Jodius

New focus for now is Phantom: the rise and revolution of Jodius Fuqua. first five chapters are up. Their short chapters and mostly talking but alot of action happens in the first few to keep you entertained and reading more. Let me know what you think and share with your fans if you think they will like it.

Hey you are an artist!!! Ok that means I like you. If you want to talk to an awsome person please PM me because I probably wont be checking this again or post on my profile. Thx hugs to the world  WAHOOOOO I am a little hyper tonigh sorry *giggle*

@MyztikalTearz It does and thanks again

@JodiusFuqua Most writers have a difficult time writing summaries. You all see the "whole picture" from where you are sitting. At times, it takes an "outsider" to bring in the audience. If that makes any sense?
          Best of luck!
          
          
          

@MyztikalTearz I really like your summary over mind. I couldn't think of one personally because i didn't how to engage someones interest but yours does it quite well. Thank you for reading and helping me out. I do believe that the note is better at the end.

@JodiusFuqua 
          
          Suggested Summary Revision for "Rise of the Phoenix":
          
          
          Life happens fast sometimes. There are moments when facts or secrets are revealed and instant reaction take over. Ever have one of those nights?
          
          
          Welcome to the great city of the Phoenix. A prosperous city and Kingdom, it exists in a parallel time as ours. The Veritas Brothers have a gift. A gift, which, in their hand, have the potential to change fate.
          
          
          But the question lies - will they step up to the task? The clock is ticking, twelve hours and ten minutes until the destiny . . . 
          
          Hurry! Enjoy the quick paced ride with the people of Phoenix.
          
          *** Author's Note @ the beginning isn't necessary. Another suggestion is to move it to the end with your thoughts of the story or how the idea came to you. Because this is a fast, paced, short story, it's really important for the reader to jump right into the conversation between the two brothers :) ***
          *Myztikal*

ThanQ *so* much for promptly sending me the summary & author's note. I'll work on it soon. :)
          Btw, thanQ, also, for fanning me. But just an FYI, I comment *a lot* it will fill up your news feeds - but you may get tips by reading what I comment to others ;)
          

Jodius, is it possible you can email me the summary & Author's note.
          
          
          myztikaltearz@inbox.com
          
          There are some things I would like to change on them (the fewer screens I have up, the easier it is for me to toggle between "personal business" while I'm working :)
          
          Also, it seems that the book is completed? That's awesome! Congratsl 
          
          At a first glance, please ensure that all of your pronoun "I" are capitalized (even in your A/N).  Many adult readers will cease reading with that "simple" typo.
          
          I may point out small grammatical errors and missed punctuation marks, but my goal is to try to get your works presentable :) ~ and to assist as many writers as possible. 

@CeciliaGabrielli You read all the chapters

Heey :) just wanted to say, awesome short story!! :D