Jae

Your stories are very BORING! Nawawalang ng TIme and Settings ang mga story mo. Madaming typos, grammatical errors. Masakit sa mata basahin. Ni hindi ko alan kung anong oras na ba. Kung nakatayo yong, nakaupo, o lumilipad ba yong mga characters. Kulang sa narration and emotions. YUCKKK! Feels like I'm going to VOMIT. 
          
          YOUR STORIES ARE NOT INTERESTING TO READ!
          
          basahin mo naman ang mga stories ko sa 2nd account ko. PERFECT is the only word to describe those.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/450888449-the-proxy-bride-taming-the-untamed-series-1-simula

Hi guys meron po akong bagong series. Sana basahin nyo din po. It's about three besty. The DOREMi.
          
          DO - Danessa Ortiz
          RE - Reese Evangelista
          MI - Melania Imperial
          
          :)