JcGatlin

@deancmoore Thank you! 

Ravenled

Hey there! 
          
          I've seen you around and I don't want to seem like too much of a hassle but could you check out my story? It's my first story and I really want to improve as a writer but I don't know how so don't be afraid to be a little harsh with your comments :X

TeeheeTacky

Hi!
          
          i have been wandering around the improve your writing forum, and noticed some smart comments you left here and there. I was hoping that you could possibly critique couple chapters of my book (as harshly as possible)
          
          please let me know if you can or unable.
          
          danke

JcGatlin

Hey Danke. Sure. I'll take a look.
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