JLAnderson0713

Hey all! I'm really proud of this latest short story and would love feedback on it. It could maybe even be developed into a novel someday. Check it out and let me know what you think! https://www.wattpad.com/1419089573-sparks-of-inspiration-no-going-back

Hard-hitting former police inspector John Daniels returns to the police station he once worked for to enlighten the new Chief Superintendent about events that occurred thirty years ago. His story of personal tragedy, the pursuit of vengeance, and touching, believable personal growth provides not only an exciting ride but a relatable journey. Retribution - A Dish Served Cold is a fast-paced, thrilling novel perfect for lovers of action, suspense, and true crime. Featuring realistic, gritty characters, the narrative keeps readers turning pages and wanting more right up until the very last line. John and the antagonist are evenly matched, and the plot is full of unexpected, interesting twists and turns. The story even features a healthy romance that makes its participants better people. Although the book isn't in a genre I normally seek out, I have thoroughly enjoyed the read and encourage all readers to give this story a chance.

I'm sorry for all of you who have been keeping up with In The Name of Love. I'm going to have to start updating on Saturdays only, instead of both Wednesdays and Saturdays. Life is really hectic and my writing isn't keeping pace with my updating, so I have to slow down the updates to maintain quality and balance.

Hi everyone!
          
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Hello, dear readers! I am starting to work through editing Of Blood and Honor and Of Love and Valor. I apologize in advance for the deluge of notifications that will no doubt result for those of you who follow me. If you are currently in the process of reading this saga, I apologize for any inconsistencies that may turn up as you read while I edit. Thank you for your support, and Happy Holidays!

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Where my fellow fantasy writers at? I've decided to give this a try. Why not join me? https://www.wattpad.com/1104591914-reading-requests-submit-your-book

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Hi JL,
          
          I agree with you about fathers and sons.  I mentioned this because as you have said it can make the opening of the chapter more exciting.
          
          Have read your changes.  Great.

Hi JL,
          
          I have given the beginning of the current chapter a little thought.
          
          My way of describing it is to put yourself in the same situation.
          
          How would any father react when he enters his daughter's bedroom and discovers her in bed with her fiance.
          
          Most, I believe, would go mental, and that's the picture you need to paint with words. Or is it more acceptable today?
          
          Only my thoughts
          
          Ron S