SHINTO-KUN

Hi can you mind read a story I made please ..
           Can you please tell.me if yheres somethinh I need to improve.... and by the way your story isn't bad .

JADDil

i'll promise to read your story, but i can't read it right away because i'm so busy right now, i hope you understand
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JADDil

@SHINTO-KUN thanks ^-^
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Claw_Marks

Hi, hope you will try to read my stories. Mamat.

JADDil

@Claw_Marks okay ^-^
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Claw_Marks

Ang Infedele po.
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JADDil

@Claw_Marks ahhmm para sayo, ano ang pinaka the best na story ang nagawa mo... yun ang una kung babasahin
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