Izawen

Hey guys, 
          	
          	Hope all is well.
          	
          	I've been looking into and updating Little Seed.
          	I felt the chapters were looking too long so I'm cutting them down a bit and I've also had a friend help me but its' all still a work in progress.
          	
          	I have also had a really busy time of late, so not been able to do all the reading I have wanted. I hope to be catching up soon.
          	
          	Thanks again, Me :)
          	
          	 

Izawen

Hey guys, 
          
          Hope all is well.
          
          I've been looking into and updating Little Seed.
          I felt the chapters were looking too long so I'm cutting them down a bit and I've also had a friend help me but its' all still a work in progress.
          
          I have also had a really busy time of late, so not been able to do all the reading I have wanted. I hope to be catching up soon.
          
          Thanks again, Me :)
          
           

Izawen

Hey guys, so today I headed up to London with a good friend to see Snow Patrol in a once in a lifetime session. It was AMAZEBALLS.
          
          Anyway on the road up (coach ride, no I wasn't driving ) my friend and I went through all published chapters of Thorns of the Broken and she help fix a few mistake and help with so sentence flow.
          
          So after our 4 and a bit hour journey, which felt like an hour, I hope I can advise you my book is better if you want to retry reading it.
          
          Thanks my lovelies. Xxx

kyromaniak

Thanks for the follow! You're books really interesting (I saw the descriptions and love the covers!) Please tell me which one you recommend to start with! And do check out  mine too - especially Dawn to Day! Thanks a lot again!

Izawen

Hi me again 
          
          I've been revising Chapter 1 'What Happen When' of 'Thorns of the Broken'.
          
          I hope I've made the right changes to make a better reading experience, this is thanks to brilliant and very helpful advise I have received.
          
          I'll admit I can get very frustrated with myself as my type of dyslexia makes my way of thinking come out the wrong way round, if you understand that  I'm trying to fix this so please bare with me 
          
          I'm going to start revising chapter 2 and will let you know when I'm done. 
          
          Thank you again ‍♀️

Izawen

@Izawen no hun. It's absolutely fine. It's good to know. I really do appreciate the feedback. 
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MichaelShivaSurya

Hi baby ❤️ 
            I didn’t know about your dyslexia, I got a message by @Avidreadersbookclub about so I checked your profile better!
            I hope I wasn’t too hard on the chapters I reviewed cause I saw your potential ✨
            I see you are working hard and that’s really admirable of you.
            If you ever need help with your editing, as I told the book club admin, I will be happy to help! 
            Thanks for your comments in my book too, you seem to be a lovely one
            ❤️❤️❤️
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Izawen

P. S that last symbol was not what posted lol. 
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Izawen

Hi everyone, I wanna give a big shout out to @challoner for all the help she has been giving me, helping understand this app and how to reach out to others. Luv ya hun xxx
          
          I also want to thank @MichaelShivaSurya and WinterMidnight44 who have been looking over my work and giving me advice. I'm taking this on board and will be editing Thorns of the Broken soon.
          
          My last thank you is everyone who is following me and taking time to read my work. X

MichaelShivaSurya

@Izawen awww, thank you so so so much for this! You are so sweet ❤️❤️❤️ And I’m happy to see that @challoner has been helping you and you are mentioning her in the same comment ahah it feels like we are part of the same family, cause I love her so much too ❤️✨
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challoner

@Izawen no problem lovely!
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JRShepherd

Thanks for the follow.

Izawen

@JRShepherd no problem! If you have any time at all please give my book a little read! I appreciate your help and advice on how to improve 
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Izawen

@Aelinthewildfire your welcome, if you have any time free please give my book a read, I appreciate any feedback and advice 
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