Inara2086

Peopleeee. Chapter 18 is out now!

Inara2086

Hey everyone. I will be busy this week, so there won't be any updates. I'm sorry, but updating twice per week is no easy feat. I'll see what I can do about it. I might be reverting back to one per week though. That's it for now. Byeee.

TheGemmeCommunity

Hi, 
          I hope it's alright that I'm reaching out here.
          
          I'm Cassie from the Gemme Community. We’re currently looking for passionate people to join our team, and I wanted to personally invite you to take a look at what we’re all about. If you're interested in being part of a supportive and creative community, I’d love for you to check out our account and hiring book.
          
          Wishing you a wonderful day/night!
          Best, Cassie

Inara2086

@TheGemmeCommunity Hey! I'll definitely check it out
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Inara2086

Hey everyone. I'm sorry to say this, but I've put Yearn on hold. It's taking a lot of time for me to come up with the storyline and I don't want all of you to wait as long as you did last time. It wouldn't be fair to you.
          
          On a better note, I've started a new novel called Intricate. It's everything I've ever wanted to read and more, so I hope you enjoy. Bye!

CANGEL1915

Hi! @Inara2086. we are paired for our assignment. I would typically message you directly, but... this is the best I can do right now :/. Before I start reading your book (which I'm super excited for!) I wanted to ask if you had any specific chapters you wanted critiqued, as well as anything in particular that you wanted me to focus on as I read. 
          If there is anything I should know about your story before I get started, please let me know! If I don't hear from you before the deadline, i will critique chapters 1 and 2 and give any feedback that I have! 
          I would appreciate chapter's 6 and 7 critiqued, but will welcome critiques on any of the chapters. :) If don't read the before chapters, just keep in mind that if somethings seem unclear (like an intro to a character), they were likely introduced beforehand. My story is an adult fanfiction of the Hunger Games. (If you'd like more information or if you are unfamiliar with that series/movie, then let me know)

CANGEL1915

@Inara2086 I will try to be as helpful as possible in giving you a readers feedback!
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Inara2086

@CANGEL1915 Hello! I'm excited to read your book too. I would appreciate it if you focused on chapters 16 and 17. I'm trying to bring in an emotional quotient and I need feedback on how the readers are perceiving it. It has put me in a little bit of a writer's block as well, so feedback would be helpful. If you have any doubt, don't hesitate to ask!
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