Hi! @Inara2086. we are paired for our assignment. I would typically message you directly, but... this is the best I can do right now :/. Before I start reading your book (which I'm super excited for!) I wanted to ask if you had any specific chapters you wanted critiqued, as well as anything in particular that you wanted me to focus on as I read.
If there is anything I should know about your story before I get started, please let me know! If I don't hear from you before the deadline, i will critique chapters 1 and 2 and give any feedback that I have!
I would appreciate chapter's 6 and 7 critiqued, but will welcome critiques on any of the chapters. :) If don't read the before chapters, just keep in mind that if somethings seem unclear (like an intro to a character), they were likely introduced beforehand. My story is an adult fanfiction of the Hunger Games. (If you'd like more information or if you are unfamiliar with that series/movie, then let me know)