mariexhood

Hai! I love ur warrior cats stories especially Frost :)
          just a little advice, I think u should space out the dialogues from the paragraph to make it a bit more a parts because reading from a big paragraph is sometimes overwhelming 
          and if u space it out it helps in the reader understand more
          just a little opinion :) hope this helps

mariexhood

Happy to help :)
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Frostheart913

@mariexhood. I understand. Thanks for the advice.  :D
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