not-realistic

Hi, my name is josiah and I would appreciate you taking the time to read my book, I usually have creative ideas like this all the time but this is my first time actually committing too to writing it out on the internet.
          
          Anyway as a rookie writer I would like to ask for constructive criticism and helpful pointers to better my story and hopefully be doing a job I love doing, good day and God bless.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/300316757?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=not-realistic&wp_originator=IcmMS7r6oiSJT2Z%2FoYn%2FJhQs8EyFw8l2uQRAoJ9P9ncb2g82WKv2xBESF%2Bv2cxFvvyH0VQWu04rrVL5jQ4j8OROfJcS%2B5%2FXzRbNHYSS8%2Bp0bEaRZpjW892Cbjbs%2BUqPS

eventhorizon283

Looking for something epic?  A touching story with action, adventure, super powers and a whole lot more then check this out. Reviews and criticism are welcome https://www.wattpad.com/story/272129497?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=eventhorizon283&wp_originator=PW2BTDljJNOUkU3lqQP0BWom%2BImR%2FoQioxh463cO2EXnW%2FOu34u%2BwiDbpCFmeX%2B7XjZGD26El7bh%2BFwWzOYQvZkEoUXFrNv97uf2qvK4WktXUTG8TXjWQZZEkBl0TL5D

spicygemini26

hey! if you like JONERYS fanfiction, I'd really appreciate it if you checked out my fic called " LOST MEMORY "
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/250252871?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jonerysdz&wp_originator=1iP3HctHg8%2BGeKlU7MOcPcevQZ7KVWQWuF53lJgVZ11TX9scOvbG3lSZ4ojOpOL%2FCZhosDC5WwGhtGqIjMOZyETqLNtK1FwjTkL6KgImvpE2uK1h5jrUqHK%2B0T%2B1qBcz

KidCleb

Hey I was wondering if you could check out my book and give me some pointers if your interested thanks
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/231460720?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create_story_details&wp_uname=KidCleb&wp_originator=1tLuwUNOMoWDu1YgEgAtxBGtO89Vt9E2npPaGPr9ycIFaFKHMcxL%2FTUsWWZ7BtziQb3mHMRYQFkKGWA3oc9Bvj3NnOnyN7j2QiG9Lmouy8er5K0UcsBUNJsJdwjGsJtO

Glorydays14

   Dear Mr. Lazuli, I want to thank you for writing Dragon Boy. I’ll admit it, I was skeptical when I first opened the book on my device. I thought, “Well, a lot of people write books about dragons. So how is this one going to be any different?”
             But then, I read it. 
             I found out how relatable Kyle is, to both girls and boys and everyone who reads it. I found out how annoyingly outspoken and boisterous people actually turn out to be different than your first impression after you get to know them. Also, I found out how the simple, pure relationship of close friends can help you through anything, even fighting seemingly impossible battles like the ones Kyle fought. 
             This book is nothing short of life-changing, and anything anyone says could never change that for me. This story means a whole lot to me. It might not for anyone else, and I’m probably just over feeling, but....
             Thanks.