EnterTheVoid78

Anyone got any ideas on how they would like the Promised Prince to continue.
          	Would you like to be more fast-paced without filler?

Iam_LewaKulture

Hi there.
          Hope you're doing well.
          
          I must say your book The People's Prince is so good. I love your writing skills, the way you use vocabularies, you write  just like George R Martin Fire and Blood. I am loving the plot and the description. You're amazing. Xoxo

EnterTheVoid78

Hello, everyone.
          
          It’s been a week since I first published my first fan fiction. Thank you to everyone who has read the story so far along with those who have voted for the story.
          
          I would like to improve my writing and was wondering if I could get some feedback and what has gone well so far and what I could improve.