shadowDrake61

Thx for the follow, wish you luck with your writing in the future 

shadowDrake61

@EndCalibur this makes it easier to tell im some ways, if you need to find a certain part that you misspelt or want to remove then you don't have to scroll through it all, plus it gives your readers a good idea where they can stop for a moment and when they get back to reading to it their not lost 
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shadowDrake61

@EndCalibur first tip would be to separate your characters talking and what happens when they aren't, for example:
            
            Nio was currently sat down, EndCalibur om his lap as he carefully polished the blade.
            
            Nio: "That's better, don't want you getting rusty."
            
            He smiled as he sheathed his sword carefully before grabbing one of the fruit his friend got and taking a bite out of it.
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EndCalibur

@shadowDrake61 if you could give some tips that would be greatly appreciated
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