BeyondCreative

Thank you for the vote on Beyond Her Final Breath! It means a lot, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. :)
          
          -Sophia ^_^

EncantadorCascade

@BeyondCreative  No problem honey! It's a wonderful book!
            I honestly am in love the way you describe your characters. 
            
            Just one thing to work on is after your onomatopoeias, you don't have to put an exclamation mark, (maybe just bold it, or put it in italics?)
            
            I totally enjoy the story though, and that's a really minor thing to worry about, so I will for sure be reading the rest. Thank you for posting this on my message board sweetie!
            
            -Elayna ^-^
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