Hi Dora!
I just finished reading your story: Love after Marriage. What a quick one it was. The pace at which the narrative unfolds took me by surprise. I didn't expect it to be so fast and frankly short. It's uh, straight to the point. I think that's how I'd describe it; and a good read.
I couldn't help but feel like I was listening to somebody tell me the story of how they found love after marriage over a cup of coffee. It didn't feel like I was reading a book. I can tell that a lot of details were left out and some questions answered, but you seem to have included enough to keep the story moving. I kind of wish the story had a bit of depth in it, you know, a chance for the audience to really get to know the character and build a relationship with them. But I guess there's a reason why you decided to go about the articulation of your ideas the way you did. After all, You good the number one spot in the short story ranking (so, you must have done something right!)
Bravo to that! Your style of writing is uh, um... different. I guess that's what makes your story stand out.
Keep writing!