Daryl Goh

I just wrote a religious poem and I couldn't think of anyone better to tell about it than you- I was hoping you could read it and give me some feedback? http://www.wattpad.com/2681118-collide?d=ud

I checked a couple of your poems and I loved them. I've got school in the morning (so I gotta sleep) but when I'm back, I'll be sure to check more of your works-they are very beautiful and inspiring to read =) keep up the beautiful job. 

@DarylGoh no prob i enjoying reading as much as i do writing, i get the feel your poems are more based on life experience. you don't have to tell whats ruining in your head ever time you write, thats the beauty in it.  

@greeneyes I'll try to include the answers before the poems. Thanks for asking! =D
          You're really helping me a lot! 

@DarylGoh no prob I enjoyed reading them.there was a couple I would like to know what you where thinking tho lol :).

Hey @greeneyes! thanks for the compliments! I'm really glad you liked them! I'll work on more!

your poems are good keep writing, cant wait to read more form you :) 

Hi @leannemarie! cool! I'll definitely read it!

Your poem has inspired me to write my own with the same kind of theme, it's called "worth it". I would love for you to read it, i would love your opinion.