DFlukes

@Limpid-Purity No worries, I'm glad to help! If there's anything else you'd like me to critique(a specific chapter?) just shoot me a message or something. I'll be glad to help. (^w^)
          	
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7bloodfire

Hi there!  Thanks for following, your support is very much appreciated.  If you did so for my writing reference posts, I hope you find them very helpful.  Just keep your eye out every Saturday, it should show up in your home news feed, or in your inbox, as I send out a mass notification where the threads will be.
          
          If you happen to read my stuff, I hope you enjoy it very much.  The books are long, but they are very well edited, and the storylines are very original and intense.  I love writing literary stuff, lol, especially literary horror, or stuff with a darker nature to it.
          
          Anyway, have a good day, k?
          
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falconssie

Reply to your critique on Chapter I of Archetype! (Finally.:P) I'm sorry I took so long to get to this. Dx
          
          Wow, thank you! ^___^
          
          :X Yeah I realise the concept of Archetypes is confusing, but to be honest I don't know exactly what's confusing./: I'm glad the definition cleared it up, though! :D
          
          You're right. xD I realise I ramble while writing, so I apologise in advance as well for all the redundancy. ): I'll spare no mercy in shaving them when I get to edits. And that's a really good suggestion. O___o I keep forgetting about the details. xD Thanks! I'll work that in.:)
          
          XD Good point. I'll change that.:)
          
          Will do!
          
          I'm glad you think so! :D
          
          It's alll wrong. It's alllll wrooong because I. MUST. RAMBLE! Nah, joking. *slaps brain* I'll fix that. xD Thank you!
          
          Life of a student indeed... )x
          
          Aw, thank you! :D I'm glad you think so. Sometimes I re-read these chapters and I don't know at all if it sounds right.
          
          You're right. Dx That whole bit doesn't feel right to me, either. I'll rework it.:)
          
          Hmm, good point. I'll rework those sentences to get rid of the stiffness.:)
          
          :D Thank you again so much for this critique!