CyberGuy419

After receiving a lot of greatly appreciated feedback and criticism, I've completely rewritten the entire prologue to Maalik's Path. Rather than jumping straight into the excitement with a voyage across the Atlantic, I've taken a step back and included a short segment in Renaissance, Italy. 
          	
          	I've taken a lot of the notes into consideration, and I'm quite pleased with my new efforts. No longer is the intro just packed with loud dialogue and 4th-wall breaks. Hope this is more enjoyable, and thanks again for the comments. Cheers

CyberGuy419

After receiving a lot of greatly appreciated feedback and criticism, I've completely rewritten the entire prologue to Maalik's Path. Rather than jumping straight into the excitement with a voyage across the Atlantic, I've taken a step back and included a short segment in Renaissance, Italy. 
          
          I've taken a lot of the notes into consideration, and I'm quite pleased with my new efforts. No longer is the intro just packed with loud dialogue and 4th-wall breaks. Hope this is more enjoyable, and thanks again for the comments. Cheers

CyberGuy419

In case anyone is concerned, I have abandoned my ONC. I never even submitted it for the Round 2 qualifications. Unfortunately, I never had the time to continue writing it.
          
          Instead, I'm spending my free time working on the EoT franchise, and Protocol Tron. Have a nice day.

David_NL

@CyberGuy419
            Alright Buddy. It's been a while.
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CyberGuy419

So, this has been a bit overdue. I've barely done any work on here, left many of my books, stopped reading for others and overall have gone quiet. What happened? 
          
          Well, I got a job as some of you know and it has drained me physically and mentally. Time has not been on my side. 
          
          Don't know when I'll ever update any of my books, but know that they are NOT abandoned. I'd rather die than leave my books like Evolution of Time or Protocol Tron unfinished. Ever since joining a guilds club, I've gotten extensive feedback on my stories and I have ideas on how to edit and fix them. As for reading other books... I'm trying. Got book assignments in other clubs that I need to read too. I genuinely don't know anymore. But yeah... Thanks for sticking around. Cheers.

CyberGuy419

And yes, I updated my pfp. This one might be permanent
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CyberGuy419

Maalik's Path new chapter woahhh, and this one's the prologue! 
          
          Prologue | Pilot
          
          So now, anyone who wants to read the book can start with the prologue that has a little mini adventure and lots of exciting dialogue and buildup. Or if you're already reading, you can check it out because it might contain a teeny bit of lore. I don't know, it's your choice. Who the hell is even reading this? Lol

CyberGuy419

@David_NL thanks, glad you like it.
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David_NL

@CyberGuy419 I'm already invested in protocol Tron's story. I'll naturally come to the second story once I'm through with protocol Tron. 
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CyberGuy419

Wow, what a shocker. Maalik's Path has received another update. I promised myself I was finished with it after 2+ years of writing it, but I guess not. This is Part I of the new additions being added. 
          
          Chapter XVI | Cairo | Part I
          
          This is part of my plan to completely rewrite the ending to Maalik's Path as I was left dissatisfied. A few more parts are to come, as well as a potential prologue to add to the very beginning oooooooh. I'm also deleting discussion questions and I reorganized the chapter parts/names.
          
          But yeah, that's about it. Thank you to absolutely nobody who has continued reading this book  but if one of you decide to read it, hope you enjoy. It's my finest work to date.  
          
          As for Protocol Tron, it has not been abandoned. I have a MASSIVE new idea that I need to implement as we approach that book's finale. It might be the most chaotic ending to a book I've ever written, and I've written some crazy endings. But yeah, that's about it... cheers.

David_NL

@CyberGuy419 I'll dive to the other stories after Protocol TRON. ☺ 
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CyberGuy419

My best, longest and probably the most controversial chapter for Protocol Tron is out. Chapter 21 | Show Them Who's Boss. Damn I had fun writing it despite it having little to no action

David_NL

@CyberGuy419 I'll check it out, bro!
            
            Also,
            
            Thanks alot for the vote, :) I really appreciate your effort.
            
            Hope you are enjoying the narrative? If there's opinion or suggestion you want to relay about the story, feel free to comment or send a private message.
            
            I'm also committed to supporting the works of those who support me. :D
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CyberGuy419

Haven't written as much as I used to. Gonna try to fix that moving forward. Here's two more chapters for Protocol Tron. 
          
          Dim Survival
          Roger Roger
          
          Comedy has reached its lowest point yet. At this rate I should change the book's genre, but the next chapters should bring some comedy back!

CyberGuy419

3 new chapters (17 - 19) have been published for Protocol Tron just in time for Halloween. 
          
          Lockdown Protocol
          Nothing to Laugh About
          Hawthorne
          
          These are the most serious and dramatic chapters in the story. While I try to keep them comedic, it was simply impossible for at least 2 of the chapters. We're in the endgame now.

CyberGuy419

Protocol Tron has finally reached its climax. We’re in Infinity War, and the next chapters I’ll be releasing later are Endgame. 16 chapters so far though, at this rate I might finish the book by chapter 25. Not sure if I want to write more to it like introduce more bad guys to keep the story going or just write a sequel or spin-off…. 
          
          I really need to work on the Evolution of Time but I’m too invested in this lmao

CyberGuy419

3 new chapters for Protocol Tron have been published. I had to take a break for almost a week due to "complicated" reasons. Anyways, these 3 chapters were written while I was personally pissed off with stuff so the writing may seem a bit different. Lol who am I kidding nobody's even reached them yet 
          
          But hey, at least 2 of those new chapters made me laugh when writing them. It should make you laugh too lol. 
          
          As for the Evolution of Time... uh... I promise I haven't forgotten about it. Not sure what to do with Maalik's Path cause it's practically finished at this point. Maybe a few more touchups but yeah. I think apart from reading books, I'll work on writing Book 2 of the Evolution of Time following someone else's path. Cheers!