Paige_Ann17

THANKS FOR TH FOLLOW! I LOVE YOUR STORY BTW! MY SCARY MATES *holds up heart with hands*

Paige_Ann17

@Crazylplpl no problem, like all those big paragraphs, there’s enough words there just maybe split them up a little so they don’t look like so much to read. Ur run on sentences I never really notice I don’t mind! I do it too lol. Imma go read chapter 2 now lol
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Crazylplpl

@Jacota_Storm Aww! Thank you so much!!!  Can you please clarify as to what you mean with too much words together?  I don't want to be writing too much, but I also don't want to write too little, you know?  Am I writing run-on sentences?  That's actually something I always do, but if that's what you mean I can totally work on it
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Paige_Ann17

@Crazylplpl I like how you describe everything with such detail, and how different the story is then the average werewolf story you know? I also like how you go into the back with such...idk passion! It’s really good. The only thing I would change is maybe not write so many words like all together, it looks like too much to read ya know? Like just space it out. Other then that your story is amazing, the amount of reads you have with only 2 chapters is pretty cool! This story is going placesssss!!!!! I’m excited to seee more chapters!! :)
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