CleoLemon

If I wrote an original fantasy romance book/series with spice, would anyone read it?

PaollaSebastian

@ CleoLemon  that's for sure 
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MightNightRight

No but what the flip ????
          
           I was reading a fanfic about the Weasley twins. I loved every chapter of it. The female protagonist being adorable and loved her personality, I was happy to see a fanfic with a good female protagonist but also the writing was very good. I liked how the twins were portrayed and how we can differentiate them but also how they really are twins. 
          
          When I started the book I didn't pay attention to the author but as I wanted to post a comment to show him some appreciation, I read the name and IT'S YOU AGAIN ???? DAMN
          
          I was shook and also it doesn't shock me because I love how you write but damn girl. You never cease to amaze me.
          
          It's been a long time since you updated the story so I don't know if you intend to continue it but I have to say that I really liked it. Also even if it's not finished, I'm not unsatisfied. It's the first time that it's happened to me. Since I love the storyline, the characters and how you made things happen in the story, it's just sikzkskzkaksjkdkz. Hard to express this feeling but I love this feeling. I would gladly read the rest if one day you think about continuing it but also I appreciate what you gave us in this story.
          
          That's all I have to say ! Ahaha. Also in my opinion, with that talent of yours, you could be a writer. I will buy the book instantly. Really you are talented.❤️

MightNightRight

@ MightNightRight  yess I just remembered that ! It makes me even more interested in your novel ! I will wait patiently hehehe. Don't worry, be focused on what you love and what makes you want to write. 
            
            I may watch the house of dragons just to read your fanfics lol. I love game of thrones but I never tried this sequel. 
            
            Anyway, a lot of love from France ! I hope both of the sides of your pillow are cold !
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CleoLemon

Also what you said in the first half of this message is hilarious! 
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CleoLemon

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! I’m actually working on an original novel right now! And I might update the Weasley story but I’m more focused on my House of dragon fanfic and the novel I’m working on right now! But I’m glad you love it! I always think my older stories could use a lot of work when look back on them.
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MightNightRight

Hello !
          
          I just finished reading "The Makings of Greatness" ! It's such a beautiful story !
          
          I loved Vale, her way of thinking, of fighting for what is right, I mean everything about her is making me... I don't have the right word in English to describe it. But I hope you get what I mean. She is a remarkable human, a pure one. The kind of one I admire. Her righteousness, her love for life, her determination to what is right and good... 
          
          I read a lot of fanfic about Obi wan but I have to say, in my opinion it was a story on its own. I really don't know how to say it but you captured the jedi's universe so well. Usually I read the story just for the character the fanfic is about but man, vale ?! She is what I pictured in my mind when I say I love strong female character. A real one in my opinion.
           Don't misunderstanding me, every one has their definition about it but for me, she embodies what I think what is a strong woman. She is not like the other characters who I believe, are "manly strong". When I read about her, I feel her. You wrote her is such a beautiful way. She is so human, it feels so good to see a strong woman captured remarkably.
          Her feminity, even if I know it's really not a topic in the book to begin with, is beautiful. I'm sorry I don't know how to say what I really want to tell you, how much I love your book.
          
          I love how you pictured love, hope, discipline, trust and goodness. What a heart-warming story. Really I mean it. Each character was interesting. You really write well and I love the way you think about the jedi's universe.
          
          Also I loved how you end the story. I expected that you would continue the timeline as it is but thank you for making it your own universe. The conclusion is everything. 
          
          The lows and highs in life, the mistakes, the obstacles, the growths, the pureness, the love.... I don't think I can put all what I think and want to say about your story.
          
          Thank you. I mean it, thank you for this story ❤️

LuvKenobi

@MightNightRight I agree, it is THE best fanfic I have ever read. And none I have read haven't even come close to this one.
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CleoLemon

Thank you so much! It means a lot, and also, I’ve never had a review like this before. It means so much to me that you took the time to write this and you really did get the side things I added in the story that weren’t just for Vale and Obi-Wan’s love story. And yeah I didn’t want it to be the same ended as in the movies because Vale, as the person she is, changed the timeline by being herself.
            
            And again, thanks for this review, I’m writing an original fantasy novel right now and I just really need to hear this!!!
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