ChocolateTokki

Happy New Year :)

Anjustin

@MsYellowBlack Happy new year!
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Diijaendy

Hi Author!
          Greetings!
          First, I want to praise the RU story, the plot and flow was nice and smooth. I love the twist and plot however after chapter 35 hindi na siya ganun ka smooth, so much loopholes and some story or timeline wasn't elaborated well that make us/me confused. It was well written actually in the first half of story. I was just disappointed and at the same time, sad, since during the captive of saphira, the chapter suddenly jump to dr. Ace's death which doesn't have any thrill at all. It made me confused. It is already in the climax, action time, im really looking forward on how saphira will be rescued, how dr. Ace's fate will be, will they have a family reunion? Why does the twin doesn't even have some questions to their father on why they got seperated on why he chose that path. How will dark unravel the truth from killing the little saphira to saphira's revival. How on earth Sheryl alive. Who is sapphire and why did she became a chip? Is there some connection or just a lucky lady to be revived. And the ending, sad. I just hope that if ever you will have some time and got some inspiration to re-read and revised the whole story again, then it would come up a top star story and will definitely re read it again from chapter 35. Thanks for the story.
          
          Sincerely,
          
          Silent reader

Miraxletain

Konichiwaa, authorr! Hurrah! Gusto ko pong magpasalamat sa pagsulat po sa ' Reignford University' , sobra sobraaa poo pasasalamat kasi sinulat nyo yon! Na pique nya agad yung interest ko! As in poo, unang kita ko pa lang MsYellowBlack! Ackk! I love it, noong una ko pong binasa author, nadismaya ako sa ending hehe, pero binasa ko po sya ulit nang ulit nang ulit, nakakaadik po syang basahin nang paulit ulit , honest poo ako! Ayon nga po, naintindihan ko na yung ending nang story MsYellowBlack! At actually maganda po yung ending! Nakakathrill po talaga sya, nakakaexcite po na mag basa nang next chap! Ang saya iimagine kung anong magyayari sa next chap MsYellowBlack!! 
          First read ko po, inaabangan ko talaga kung kailan marereveal yung katauhan nya:DD.
          Iyon lamang MsYellowBlack! Thank you talaga po sa pagsulat noong story! Ang ganda po noong plot! MsYellowBlack, thank you ulitt! 
          Hintayin ko po next story nyooo, hiling ko po na sana action yung gagawin nyo, hehe:DD
          
                                                 Loyal Reader, Miraxletain
               
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ChocolateTokki

@Miraxletain thank you sa pampagood vibes na comment but sad to say hindi ko mapagtuunan ng pansin ang pagsusulat dahil kinakain ng work ko ang aking oras but still I will try my best na bumalik sa pagsulat. And sure action pa rin ang genre. Thank you ulit.
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vianarain0208

kagandang story naman po ito, dagdag collection ko na naman po.
          pero TSIAMO stands for what po ba? twice ko na po binasa ang RUTMO pero di ko ma gets yung meaning ng TSIAMO. thankies po

vianarain0208

thanks po sa reply
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ChocolateTokki

@vianarain0208 old title po ng Rutmo, 
            The school is a mafia org.
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