Girlyfunloves1

I hope you can replied on both of my replies I just hope you can follow me and you can be the first person to like my story it’s just that I’ve been going through much getting insults and bullying about my story and is it OK if you can follow me back if that’s all right with you if you can be the first person to follow me I just hope so

Girlyfunloves1

Will that okay I just wanted to stay connected with you and I really want to say thanks for helping and I don’t know how to start the smut part because I never get help with my friends is it okay if you could give a advice of how to start it off of that okay with you

Girlyfunloves1

Hello I hope you can reply to me two times and I hope you can give me advice because I want my character girl and Glamrock Freddy I don’t know how to start off the smut part for them in the beginning because she’s going to be top and he’s going to be bottom but I hope you can replied back to me and also if you have TikTok can I probably maybe follow you so I can stay connected with you if that’s fine with you and also I hope you have an account

Casanovatea

@Girlyfunloves1 Don't use Tiktok. Personally not a fan of the app. As for starting it, there's only really one way I can think of:
            
            Freddy: "I hope you had a good night, Superstar. I tried my hardest to make it the best I could."
            
            Spouse: "Yeah, I did. I think you did a wonderful job with everything."
            
            Freddy: "Daw... Thank you as well. For everything. I love you, a lot..."
            
            Spouse: "I love you too. More than words can describe. But before we end the night, how about we retire to your room for a bit of fun, if you know what I mean~"
            
            Freddy: "O-Oh! Of course! I would never turn down that kind of offer, darling."
            
            Spouse: "Perfect. Allow me to return the favor for all you've done for me tonight."
            
            *Freddy and his Spouse hold each other's hands as they head back to his room for a night of unadulterated fun.*
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Girlyfunloves1

Replied to me I hope you could give me a long advice when Glamrock freddy is bottom and Lucy is top please please replied to me

Casanovatea

@lucygirlfanf19 (Repost since I had to fix a grammar error)
            
            I'm sorry, but as I said, dialogue isn't my strong suit. So I can't offer much outside of making use of things like "Hah..." or "You're so good at this...". There are many ways to go about it, like dirty talk, teasing, and romance talk. Either way, I'll give it my best shot.
            
            Spouse: "Do you like this?"
            
            Freddy: "Yes... So much... Can... Can you go a little faster?"
            
            Spouse: "Not until I hear you use that handsome maw of yours to beg for it."
            
            Freddy: "P-Please... Please, Superstar... I-I promise to return the favor if you go even just a bit faster... Your t-touch feels so...good..."
            
            ----
            
            Spouse: "How is this? Do you like it? Does it feel good? Tell me what you want, and I'll make it happen."
            
            Freddy: "Mmm~ It feels great... Much better than doing it by myself. If you could speed up just a little, I would appreciate it..."
            
            Spouse: "Of course. Anything for you, my lord."
            
            ----
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Girlyfunloves1

Replied to me please give me advice I want to start off the smut part I want my character girl to be top and I want Glamrock Freddy to be top and bottom for her and try to make the smut part long can you please help me???

Girlyfunloves1

Replied to me please I don’t know how to add them talking while they are having sex that she is going to be top and Glamrock Freddy I just don’t know how to add there talking 
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Girlyfunloves1

Thanks but get me some advice I don’t know how to add them talking while they are having sex that what I need help if that okay with you that all I need please 
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Casanovatea

@lucygirlfanf19 I really would love to help, trust me, but I have zero experience with writing female smut. The best thing I can say is to start off with foreplay and have them assess their kinks, fetishes, etc. Once the clothes come off, either start with oral or get straight to penetration. If Freddy is taking the initiative, have him prepare her first with some lube. If the girl is calling the shots, have her stroke him with lube before getting into the riding of any sort. As for how long it lasts, I personally wouldn't dwell on it since the average smut scene for fanfics is pretty short. Being more detailed would help make it longer, however.
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