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CalebTyG
Jul 06, 2019 10:49PM
I need constructive criticism! As much as I can get! Please do not hesitate to give me feedback on plot, characters, style, dialogue...anything you notice that might help me improve my book or make m...View all Conversations
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The Forsaken Lands
Alder lives in Sundraydia, an isolated land where books-and the magic that can be learned from them-are forbi...
