BrownCoconati

It’s 25th so Merry Christmas everyone, especially to all the amazing and talented writers. Thank you for making 2020 a bit better for most of us. Let’s hope 2021 is good to us. Xoxo

BrownCoconati

I'm so behind I just watched "365 days" and it reminds me of all the Mafia stories I've read on here❤

BrownCoconati

Update: Part 2 is worse than the first one lol 
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lushcae

@BrownCoconati exactly i know some writers that could have writter even a better script bc that was cringyy
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BrownCoconati

@SelmaxSophia Ikr. The movie could've been better. I can tell the writing was really bad. 
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BrownCoconati

90s babies hands up :)
          
          
          She's got green eyes, and she's 5'5"
          Long brown hair all down her back
          Cadillac truck
          So the hell what
          What's so special about that?
          She used to model, she's done some acting
          So she weighs a buck o' five
          So I guess she's alright if perfection is what you like
          
          Oh, oh, and I'm not jealous, no, I'm not
          Oh, oh, I just want everything she's got
          Oh, oh, you look at her so amazed
          I remember way back when you used to look at me that way
          
          

BrownSkinGal23

Yeesss :) ❤
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BrownCoconati

No Man's Islands
          
          Like cold marble statues stiff as vague mixtures of alcohol that stings of spirits, cheap as famished souls. Once were unique and proud, now the vanishing isles! 
          
          A struggle to keep adrift to face the blue sky vast and unyielding, matching that deep Pacific Ocean. Hear us now gagging on driftwood and rising waters.
          
           Peaceful seas of dreams where dancing bonitos circle canoes,surfing freely cruising with yellow fins in oceans of fun. Now hear chokes of sinking feelings and sirens lamenting restless souls. 
          
          As sea sprays watered eyes in contrition someone changed the climate in Iceland and desert storms rampaged our islands. Rumblings of constipated volcanoes longing for release but now stifled by solar shields torn by man's greed. 
          
          As I float amongst the beaches of ghostly Polynesian islands, the reefs cry out in protest as navigation comes full circle, back to 'hawaiki' our 'once was seen' home of origin, a failed quest reiterating the original theme of a people that "once upon a time" existed now once again A no man's islands.
          
          
          Tiaua M Ioane

BrownSkinGal23

@BrownCoconati Sad but beautiful ❤
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EroticMarie

this is beautiful and sad all at once  
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