BlueButterfly5

Hey guys! I haven't updated my book in forever, but I need some ideas. Please comment! I was thinking of... adding another character, but maybe too soon? a good punishment or maybe pleasure scene? or add plot twist? or something else you guys could think of?

prvncessrose

@BlueButterfly5 You should do a chapter with her thoughts on everything that happened that week and include her feelings about being a submissive and Baileys betrayal. Maybe you should  do a chapter of each week and have the story escalating to the wedding day and wedding night *wink wink* if you know what I mean. That's some ideas I have cause I really love this story and think its very creative and imaginative. Keep going with it. If you want I would gladly love to give you some chapter's
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BlueButterfly5

Hey guys! I haven't updated my book in forever, but I need some ideas. Please comment! I was thinking of... adding another character, but maybe too soon? a good punishment or maybe pleasure scene? or add plot twist? or something else you guys could think of?

prvncessrose

@BlueButterfly5 You should do a chapter with her thoughts on everything that happened that week and include her feelings about being a submissive and Baileys betrayal. Maybe you should  do a chapter of each week and have the story escalating to the wedding day and wedding night *wink wink* if you know what I mean. That's some ideas I have cause I really love this story and think its very creative and imaginative. Keep going with it. If you want I would gladly love to give you some chapter's
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