AnlythDalar

Heavily considering the possibility of going back to creepypasta for the rest of September and October up until Halloween. Told myself I wouldn't but it's awfully tempting after watching David Near's "Morgue Files." Highly recommend. I have never had so many ideas pumping through my mind

AnlythDalar

Heavily considering the possibility of going back to creepypasta for the rest of September and October up until Halloween. Told myself I wouldn't but it's awfully tempting after watching David Near's "Morgue Files." Highly recommend. I have never had so many ideas pumping through my mind

StreathamJon

I like your story so far! I just thought I'd say watch your tenses. It should all be past tense. :-)

AnlythDalar

@StreathamJon Thank you! Sorry for the late response, I had trouble resetting my account. I'm doing some exercises to make sure I catch my tendency to shift tenses. It's a bit of a struggle since it's a bad habit, but I'm getting there! I appreciate your feedback and compliment! Have a wonderful day. Bless
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