Ani122

I love the beginning of your story

No problem! I'm pretty sure my writing has way more mistakes than yours, so don't worry about them that much :) I just always try to leave criticism for the author as well.

@XxDrakeGoesGagaxX good point!! the words are writtin i just gotta finish editing it which i could be doing on here anyway but idk haha

Continue 'Provoke'. If the words are burning to get out, why stop them from bursting onto your screen? It's Non-Fiction #11 < Numbers don't lie! :D x

@ArianaGray thanks so much, i think your a really goood writer. 

@Ridelova101 nppp :}

Thank you so much for fanning! =D

You're welcome. :)

@Ani122 Thank you soooooooo much 4 the vote :P

@Ani122 Thanks :P