My normal life but yet not so normal at all ( ON HOLD)

My normal life but yet not so normal at all ( ON HOLD)

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Theresa By tencats Updated Jan 24, 2011

Asha, is a normal teenage girl who thinks her life will be going as it always has been, and it will be normal. But she doesn't know that her life is soon going to be turned upside down.

nicolle1496 nicolle1496 Jan 24, 2011
I'm interested to see where you're going with this. This chapter was a little bit perdictable, but thats fine with me. I do think you need to show off her personality a bit more though and explain more about her.
                               But overall I like it :)