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The vampire pet

The vampire pet

76.6K Reads 2K Votes 7 Part Story
Gaby By gabystgo163 Updated Jun 18, 2013

Rose is a cool girl with no friends, and she doesn't believe that vampires and werewolf exist. One day she decided to walk to her house instead of taking the school buss. She got lost in the woods and the next thing she knows she's in a vampire mansion, and she's the vampire pet...

blue_shadow12 blue_shadow12 Nov 25, 2016
please use better grammar. it makes me cringe. it's not cute, not funny, it's awful.
vanityismybaby vanityismybaby May 29, 2015
You might want to edit and proof-read your work before you publish but it is a good story so far
princessunicorn666 princessunicorn666 May 11, 2015
poorly written + cliche af +pathetic grammar im not even gonna waste my time with this utter garbage
Whammie_kicker Whammie_kicker Mar 06, 2015
I can barely read it cause of the grammar because of that one flaw I have to go back and reread the sentences to understand the reading but other than that it seems like a good story
cmr1200 cmr1200 Dec 29, 2014
you should really relook at the grammar and I bet sooooo many more people would read it
desireekh13 desireekh13 Nov 13, 2014
No offense here:
                              Worst grammar I've EVER seen. However, I'm willing to look past it :) You've got an interesting story going on here, and I intend to read on. I don't give up on books THAT easily :) Good job so far!