Naruto Rants and OC Reviews

Naruto Rants and OC Reviews

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Rika Shiro By Tishikoru Updated Oct 11

I'm just going to rant about things in Naruto fanfictions that annoy me. I'll also do OC reviews.

MissMurderz MissMurderz Sep 26
I replaced every 'orbs' in a fanfic with 'balls'. It was heIIa funny.
                              
                              "I stared intensely into Naruto's big blue balls."
                              
                              "Sasuke turned my way and all I saw was his worried onyx balls."
                              
                              Quality.
It sounds stupid. Makes me picture their eyes as glass when they say 'orbs'...
TENTEN-BISH TENTEN-BISH Sep 05
I have a parody Mary Sue but that probably doesn't count. I have this boi one that I haven't written a out yet tho :'/
MissMurderz MissMurderz Sep 26
Just remember guys, if you have blue (or onyx) balls, go see a doctor. Like, now.
OwlOtaku123 OwlOtaku123 Sep 14
ORBS
                              I FRICKING HATE THAT WORD
                              
                              Dark brown eyes are much cooler than blue ones.
Agreed ^_^ unless it's me I literally scared myself in a mirror