New Beginnings

New Beginnings

275 Reads 2 Votes 7 Part Story
Devin(: By MsDevinAlabama Updated Aug 06, 2011

Ashley has had a rough past, but she hopes to start off anew when she moves to Florida. When she meets Des, she thinks he might be the one to finally get her to come out of her shell. But, she can't seem to leave behind her standoff-ish lifestyle and trust him. Will she trust him completely, or will she have to break his heart before he breaks hers? Because, little does Ashley know, Des has some problems of his own.

lovehasitscons lovehasitscons Jan 17, 2011
Where did you get that name dude? lol original I like it good job...i kinda like how he is shy,but what about Jaxson? I am sure he would threaten Des....right? Are people going to notice?
lovehasitscons lovehasitscons Jan 17, 2011
This is great. I love how she is warning herself about Des. I think that she is just scared and doesnt realize that what happened with her parents doesnt have to happen to her. Good job on this chapter again!!!
marabelli marabelli Dec 31, 2010
I really think this is good for you first story! the writings really good :) and i like the plot! well done