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Letting Go

Letting Go

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Whitney By FlowerofHope Updated Dec 08, 2011

Okay time for an Update!!! I'm going to start editing some of my work because now that I look back at them and relaize how stupid some of them are it makes me want to change them. So to all of you who have read some of my poems I'll be making a little change on some of them (maybe a big change). Also for those of you who are new to my page I hope you enjoy reading some of my poems :) Thanks for reading =:3 


SnowyRoses SnowyRoses Feb 03, 2012
This is really good.  And meaningful.
                              But don't forget the capital letters!!
AshleyCooley8 AshleyCooley8 Dec 12, 2011
This could be really well done with just a bit of polishing, in the grammar department.  I like how you ended it.
EASYAutismB1 EASYAutismB1 Nov 07, 2011
It was very well written.I believe you captured the essence of subtle sadness.I enjoyed reading this peace and hope to find time to read your other poems and story.
WatcherOnTheWalls WatcherOnTheWalls Sep 08, 2011
Wow, thats amazing. I'm not good at poetry, and i rarely read it, but i do love it. It conveys the emotion so well. And i also felt so sad. I really do love and continue what you're doing. Poetry is also a window to you're soul, let it out girl :D
Gabrielbraun22222 Gabrielbraun22222 Jun 24, 2011
I liked it, it does remind a bit of my work.... If you want to see more of my work just search in yahoo my name Gabriel braun.
                              I have many more songs if you like to comment and it's under the name- is my song/poem good?
lithium_revolver lithium_revolver Jun 19, 2011
i love it, i like how it doesn't ryme i write alot of poetry and people always think that to be a poem it should ryme it really irritates me. you are a good writer