Dissenter's Rise Book 1: Smoke-Filled sky (On-Hold)

Dissenter's Rise Book 1: Smoke-Filled sky (On-Hold)

359 Reads 4 Votes 4 Part Story
Natalie M. By EnvyinEloquence Updated Feb 04, 2011

Set in the post-apocalyptic wasteland of former San Francisco, wolves are the dominant race. But life is not easy in the maze of burnt houses and crumbling skyscrapers, and the situation is growing more and more dire. As time passes, the story takes a darker turn. Centered around a leader who is greeted by a goddess by the name of Nera to deliver the wolves from misery, the pack rituals are turning bloody. As pups are snatched in the dead of night, it's no longer clear if Nera is goddess or demon. Will you take part in the bloodshed or dissent and rebel against the pack under a sky filled with the smoke of war?

chrisxnatty chrisxnatty Aug 13, 2012
Nearly everything you have composed here was neat and well written. You have done an excellant job with creating the landscape and mapping out the setting. some people just dont appreciate details like that anymore
EnvyinEloquence EnvyinEloquence Jan 21, 2011
thanks for your opinion, but it may look long in here, but it should be even longer in real life and i actually want to someday be published. i have been grounded and i was handwriting y story so i have to type up some more of it befroe i can update. i am almost done with chapter 3 though.
EnvyinEloquence EnvyinEloquence Dec 10, 2010
THANKS! actually, if you go to the next page, the actual story starts, and yes, i already know that the firs tpage or so of chapter 1 is basiocally just a copy of the background one, but with minor changes.