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The Gangleaders Girl

The Gangleaders Girl

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caroline james By romancebaby123 Updated 4 days ago

Elena Johnson  just moved to LA her first day at her new school she meets Ryan Williams the leader of the most dangerous gang in town the Hurricanes  Ryan falls in love with her instantly when she bumps into him in the hallway.....
Watch where you're going
um sorry holy crap
 hey guys I cuss  in here don't read if you don't like cussing 

iti-Osity iti-Osity May 02
You don't me 
                              I'm not just one of y'all many toys 
                              You don't own me
                              Don't say I can't go with other boys 
                              Don't tell me what to do 
                              And don't tell me what to say 
                              Please when I go out with you 
                              Don't put me on display 
                              σr ѕσmєthíng líkє thαt
maartje_brander maartje_brander 3 days ago
I'm sorry but the way it is written is just.... you know.... bad, I'm sorry
ZoroThePirate ZoroThePirate Jul 13, 2016
Y don't u use quotations when the characters talk? It would b Mich easier for both u and the reader that way! (")
just a little tip is hard to read the dialog so can you put quotation marks or somthing to mark the dialog.
Tommy4life Tommy4life Jul 01, 2016
Umm sorry if this sounds rude but I think u should put these" so that the readers can know when the characters are talking
                              And again soo soo sorry if u find this rude
When your charecters are speaking you should put quotation marks around the scentences for example...
                              "What the hell," I said to him. 
                              "You teased me, i didn't like that." Ryan replied. 
                              "You don't own me," I told him.