The Afflicted

The Afflicted

508 Reads 13 Votes 1 Part Story
Zackery Foy By Foyboy94 Updated Nov 18, 2010

16 year old Raineshate, just got his license and a new car. The only problem with this is that it leads to his parents death which will affect his life forever in ways not even he can imagine.

    LittleDhampir18 LittleDhampir18 Nov 23, 2010
    I loved it (: really good story, I think you have a great storyline and I love shape shifter stories (: update soon (:
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    karebear17 karebear17 Nov 22, 2010
    i really like it but, there are just some errors, otherwise a very good start and i am exited to see where you go from here. i also voted for your story, i do really like it.
    karebear17 karebear17 Nov 19, 2010
    i really like your story deff different than other stories on this site. a few errors otherwise i would really love to see where you go with your story. keep up the awesome fantasticness
    xxitunes22 xxitunes22 Nov 19, 2010
    hey thats pretty good...shapeshifter interesting
                                  keep upploading
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    PerfectMurderer PerfectMurderer Nov 19, 2010
    voted....well, hez pretty cool...i would be lyk in a crazy house for depressed ppl if i killed mie parents ~on accident~ ;3
    anakelia anakelia Nov 19, 2010
    how sad!!!...yeah continue. 
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