The Junior

The Junior

196 Reads 9 Votes 13 Part Story
Utkarsh Sharma By utkarshh Updated Jul 01, 2013

This is first fiction I am writing on paper. I couldn’t make it great with writing. But the story is appreciable. As an honest reader, I will rate it in great stories.
This is adventurous tale of a girl. I tried to show how a girl’s subconscious takes love. You will have to read till end to understand the story. Have patience.

utkarshh utkarshh Jun 28, 2013
thanks for appreciation and vote....:)
                              
                              yeah it's pretty fast in beginning...actually i was writing a story for first time...it will get decent speed afterwards..
DivyaNayak DivyaNayak Jun 28, 2013
great start utkarsh.....its running so fast and flawless........
                              but you should describe things a little more...
                              
                              nyways u  maintain suspense and mystery pretty well
                              keep going.
                              :)