Sharing the Throne(On Hold)

Sharing the Throne(On Hold)

176 Reads 12 Votes 3 Part Story
Jojo By joahna103091 Updated Mar 16, 2012

Princess Aracelie always gets what she wants, she is spoiled til no end and is a complete daddy's little girl, but hey who could blame her?? she is an only child and the heir to the throne who lost her mother at an early age, even for a vampire. all she thinks about is capturing her dad's attention, partying, shopping and well boys. she is to become Queen of the salazar vampire kingdom when she decides she is ready to take charge, but that all changes when her father decides to adopt a human and turns him into a royal vampire, giving her a brother she never wanted or asked for and forcing her to share the throne with him.

  • anger
  • bite
  • blood
  • brat
  • friends
  • jealousy
  • jerk
  • king
  • kingdom
  • prince
  • princess
  • royalty
  • sharing
  • spoil
  • vampire
fairytaledoeshappen fairytaledoeshappen Oct 29, 2011
hey, I think it's a great story. I'm not a big fan of vampire story, but this chapter interest me :) I noticed some grammatical mistakes but it's okay, i just let it away. It's a great story after all :)
joahna103091 joahna103091 Sep 29, 2011
@clichelover finally some feedback!! thanks i'll keep that in mind when I do the second chapter =), and yes i really need to edit my stories but i was sort of in a rush to just put it out there but thanks for the honest feedback i really appreciate it
clichelover clichelover Sep 29, 2011
i like the story and plot but should try to edit the story and take out all the "hahaha" and make him a more serious intense sexy cocky vampire (just a suggestion)