Forced love

Forced love

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nnelas By nnelas Updated Apr 02, 2013

"Kiss me, like you love me" he said. I kissed him with all I had.. He smirked as we pulled apart. "I hate you" i breathed out. He smirked again "So why did you kiss me?" he asked. I looked down, I cant do this anymore, but I know I have to.. " Because the price of not kissing you was too high" he leaned closer and whispered to my ear "What was the price again?" I shivered, when the memories came running back to me, but I pushed them away. "My father's life" I finally said.  What happens if 17 years old Cornelia founds that her father was kidnaped by the Williams brothers , her childhood best friend and his brother... Now they hate each other. And she has pretend to be in love with one of them to get him back.. But why? And what's in for them? How strong their hate is? Read and find out...

julie233 julie233 Feb 07, 2014
Sounds good so far. hope u go into some back story as the book progresses
MeganJenson MeganJenson Jun 13, 2013
@bmj23a Its the first chapter, of course there's no climax yet. But mabey you meant there hasn't been a reason given why they just decided to kidnap her.
MeganJenson MeganJenson Jun 13, 2013
Wait why would her Dad ask her to get somthing from the store and then while she's gone, he just ups and leaves on a buisness trip? Mabey the brothers actually have him tied somewhere but still, why would she assume that??? Anyhow, its still good!
bmj23a bmj23a Apr 18, 2013
the story was interesting but no climax or real point to the story.keep trying though
aries88 aries88 Apr 08, 2013
Oh my gosh!! This book is so funny and I've only read the first chapter. This is amazing.
MynameisnotTangerine MynameisnotTangerine Apr 07, 2013
I dont mean  2 affend u but I tink u can du betta. 
                              maybe slow things down and make it REALLY interestin...
                              (p.s i lyk were dis is goin!!)
                              keep up the good work! :D