I Found a Gem

I Found a Gem

1 Part Story 126 Reads 26 Votes
Zy By SunAndCandleLight Updated Aug 23, 2012

 To be lost in faraway deep

I lay before I sleep

Warmth that my spirit seek

I pray that you guide and keep

Reminisced the piercing day

I implored you to just stay

Made a promise all will be okay

Will make the return someday

How foolish and naive to believe!

Now I am bereaved

Cold, lifeless, alone to grieve

Bittersweet memories you leave

Like a flower painfully withering

A heartless winter never ending

Candle's flame slowly dying

Seasons of drought and famine

But through the mist and haze

A light beckons, caught me in daze

Softly, tenderly, nothing can faze

Filled with love, I am raised

Brought my flower back to life

End my infinite winter strife

A new heat to my dying flame

Season of rapture because You came.

EsmeClark_ EsmeClark_ Jan 03, 2013 09:22PM
I adore the way you write- it just brings everything to life! :)
seeliot seeliot Oct 07, 2012 08:38PM
agree with the comment below. you write with such passion. your verses glide into each other seemingly without effort. your words reveal a deep thinker. a lovely poem.
knightwriter knightwriter Sep 23, 2012 02:38PM
I found a gem in this uplifting poem that moves from feelings of loss and sorrow to a realization of hope in the  Spirit of love.  nicely penned.  ~)K
seasofme seasofme Sep 12, 2012 08:49AM
The full cycle of loss and regaining what you love. I like the positive ending. Quite charming, in fact.
Amuse-bouche Amuse-bouche Sep 11, 2012 04:01PM
This wonderful warm offering is penned with the glow of Love...it beacons to others who have yet to find the way...lovely work!  ;~))
@justactnormal97 thanks I appreciate your effort to comment :)