NOT DONE WITH STORY YET...THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A STORY ON HERE AND IM TRINNA FINISHED I,,,COMMENT AND IF YOU CAN HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER BY ALL NEEED TELL ME CAUSE IT IMPORTANT TO ME TO KNOW HOW YOU GUYS FEEL ABOUT MY STORY
NOT DONE WITH STORY YET...THIS IS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A STORY ON HERE AND IM TRINNA FINISHED I,,,COMMENT AND IF YOU CAN HELP ME MAKE IT BETTER BY ALL NEEED TELL ME CAUSE IT IMPORTANT TO ME TO KNOW HOW YOU GUYS FEEL ABOUT MY STORY