This is my version of Pokémon High School. It's basically about Serena moving to high school in the Kanto region and notices Ash is there. Will she manage to make him hers? Read on to find out!
GO FENNEKIN, BITE THE MEAN LADY!!!! I think that Serena's mon, and Dawn's dad, are dating.
Very good, but you need to pay attention to capitol letters.
why is dawn the antagonist in the story? I have a friend that ships ash and dawn
"The office had a nice aroma to it"
*I die, gagging on perfume*
I already LOVE Fennekin, and my love for it just went up, I thought that was impossible given how much I already LOVE LOVE LOVE it!
Hm... History teacher should be Drayden. Or any Gym Leader who is already old, and you know. Age comes with experience. Good story. though. Very good. I rarely find stories with perfect grammar such as this. That's what makes it stand out from the others.