A Bit On The Side

A Bit On The Side

1 Part Story 618 Reads 21 Votes
Sara E Eliot By seeliot Completed

Keith couldn’t understand Mel: he’d treated her so badly, yet she was still prepared to forgive and forget.  What was it about the girls from the other side of the city?  Were they all so nice, or was Mel an exception?

EvaTells EvaTells Jan 23, 2013 09:45PM
O.O ...OMG.. that literally gave me chills.. excellent work XDD!! V !! ^_*
NicholasFewell NicholasFewell Sep 05, 2012 01:06AM
Oh snap! That just blew my tiny mind! He was her bit on the side! Ha ha!
isabel75 isabel75 Aug 31, 2012 03:34PM
Oh my god! I cant't believe it! I'm amazed! Super well written!
garciadiaz garciadiaz Aug 12, 2012 12:33PM
Another great short story with a neat little twist at the end. I was expecting something out of the ordinary to happen but wasn't quite sure what it would be, you kept me guessing all the way through.
i love this!! its filled with detail and good descriptions!!! 
                                    i love ur style of writing and i really enjoyed reading this!! 
                                    loved the ending
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