Taken Away

Taken Away

883 Reads 19 Votes 5 Part Story
Noah N' Dawn Vanderhyde By NoahNDawnVanderhyde Updated Oct 31, 2011

A young boy gets the chance to save the world, Please read

letseatzombies letseatzombies Apr 09, 2011
hmm u have quite the imagination :)
                              its really good.. call me later so i can show you how to separate the chapters so its not all in one part.. 
i_sell_seashells i_sell_seashells Mar 27, 2011
i agree with lovestrykes, and it seemed kinda rushed, but still good writing don't get me wrong, but I had no idea who these characters were, and everything. unless that was the point, but i like plot and your a good writer(:
heartflower heartflower Mar 27, 2011
Every piece of dialogue deserves its own special paragraph. Please remember that. :)