The Ransom

The Ransom

417 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
❤ By Twilight860 Updated Mar 02, 2013

The two richest kids are kidnapped by someone with a grudge with their parents and want the truth and a ransom...................................

FrozenHearts FrozenHearts Feb 27, 2011
you need to make paragraphs seperate. seperate different thoughts or what's happening and put what people are saying in a different paragraph too.