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Forget Me Not

Forget Me Not

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Colm By ThenColmSaid Updated Feb 26, 2011

It was a winter evening when the childhood of the precocious Charlie Huck drew to an end.  It was also the night death came prowling around the chimney pots to arrive at a frozen lake and take the breath away from the lungs of his best friend Daniel and flood them with cold water.

The body was found to be empty once dragged back up from the lakes, but the boy remained trapped under the lake. With no one believing him, Charlie Huck set out alone to rescue his friend from the watery depths of that chilly darkness.

This is wonderful so far! Captivating and relatable. Keeping it realistic, yet interesting! Love it!
x0XjamieeX0x x0XjamieeX0x Mar 04, 2011
Good job ! I love the description and word choice. *voted* :P